Rough Draft...
Karen heard the
noise outside and was scared but she knew her husbands voice and
looked out the window. She saw Dave coming slowly across the yard but
something was wrong, his shirt was torn and it had a black stain
running down the front and his face didn't look right, “Maybe he
fell” Karen thought, So she opened the door and just then the Moon
came out from behind a cloud and she got a good look at him and
screamed............
as he got 10 yards
from the door..Dave saw out of the good eye he had left, Karen open
the Door and screamed he yelled through what bloody lips he had left
“Get Back Inside” and then he heard them coming..The last thing
he saw was teeth and felt a razor sharp claw raked across his throat
on both sides..
Alan Stanford
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